tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4317173063028934185.post2542604818761317795..comments2014-06-07T22:07:51.868-04:00Comments on The Heartless Duke: To Prologue or Not to PrologueThe Heartless Gamer Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07343422140878614695noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4317173063028934185.post-85208529446801835502012-01-09T19:55:45.394-05:002012-01-09T19:55:45.394-05:00I like the idea of keeping the reader in suspense ...I like the idea of keeping the reader in suspense and getting rid of the prologue (and this has nothing to do with the first line). :) You have a sympathetic heroine and by the end of the story your readers will love him despite his flaws.Rachel Rossanohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12984724805729525522noreply@blogger.com